Assignment 17: Elevator Pitch 2
After my last elevator pitch, I received a lot of positive feedback. People praised the idea of talking about the prices and hours during my elevator pitch. Therefore, I was sure to include that again in this elevator pitch. This time, I also included why I chose the mountain that I chose. I thought that this was important because I did choose a very specific mountain to first open my service. I also was sure to not use a webcam or sit down. People were also very fond of the idea of Snow Paws, which was very reassuring. I made sure that I included all of the necessary components of the pitch, while also switching it up from last time.
Hi Mads, I think this is a great pitch that includes a lot more information that would reel customers in! With more feedback I can definitely see the improvement in your pitch, and it is very clear that there is passion. I love the idea of Snow Paws and it has been great to see you refine the idea and communicate the offering to customers in a concise and engaging manner.
ReplyDeleteHi Mads, You did a good job to take in feedback of others and redo your elevator pitch. I think your pitch was very convincing and you projected your idea very professionally. Importantly, I think you did a great job of condensing all important information into the 90 seconds. I think you provided me with all the important information about Snow Paws.
ReplyDeleteHi Mads, I like you elevator pitch with your enthusiasm for your product and your attention to detail about it. I’m so sold on it. I think any investor would be crazy not to give it a second look to see about investing. I always think about Shark Tank the show and think about what they would say or do. I think they would make you an offer!
ReplyDeleteHey Madison! Your elevator pitch was filled with a lot of important information to target and attract prospective clients for you and your businesses. I think you spoke very concisely throughout the video and in a very professional manner, which presents your business in such a positive. I know that your customers are now fully aware of the idea of Snow Paws and that it will be a great place for their animals!
ReplyDeleteHey Madison, again I think you did a great job on thus elevator pitch. Your tone was very enthusiastic and made it more enjoyable to listen too because it was prevalent you actually cared about the subject at hand. I like how in this pitch you went into more detail about the mountain of your selections on how you expanded on the idea of Snow Paws. Looking forward to see where this goes from here!
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